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Lissa Lee by Miss-Von-Gore Lissa Lee by Miss-Von-Gore
The beautiful Lissa Lee!! Hope you like this ;)
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Critique by VSConcepts VSConcepts/critique/586069082">Mar 7, 2012, 1:52:03 PM
I'd like to take a moment to offer what I see from my perspective. I'll clarify by saying I in no way can produce the art that you can in this medium, but merely offer a layman's view.

Umm. Lines on her tummy of some kind? Like a little muscle tone, shaping above the hip? And.. The neck. Looks like her neck is connected at both shoulders - a bit too wide. On 'top', her right-cheek, you see the line come up above her breast, and disappear behind where her ear is. And again you see it out by her shoulder, where the trapezoid connects the shoulder to the neck. Except that a woman's traps are not so large or defined, and never quite so wide. I totally understand perspective and the fact that she's smushing herself in the upper torso, which is why the arm 'under' is so wide, and why the breasts look like they're different sizes. All about the angle we're viewing the subject from, right? I'd just touch up that neck/traps area, and add some shadow in her lower abdomen to show some toning..

That's all I can offer, and I think it's fairly thin, on a truly outstanding painting job!
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gibboart Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Nice job... ;)
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grimagix Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Traditional Artist
I love this one she is gorgeous:D
epic job my friend
Miss-Von-Gore Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
thanks so much as always :blowkiss:
grimagix Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Traditional Artist
yvw my friend :blowkiss:
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